Here u go
A promised, awaited melancholic cry of my heart. Wif a piece of A4, a black ball-pen n a few cups of Mocha, I'm giving u ...
O Heart, Be True
It was only yesterday I saw you
And it's just today I am leaving you
How I am supposed to tell
All the misery, disruptions of hell
It was not started but from this friendship
In it, my love and concern blossom so deep
But my heart wasn't true
As I regard you more than a friend like the others do
I feel bad - my heart is sad
For my mind goes mad
For the price I have to pay
For the love I couldn't say
For the sleepless nites I undergone
Waiting the true to blow its horn
For we can't be together
As apart from me, there is someone better
Leaving in your house feels like a mouse
For I am scared to be the real me
For the disappointment of hope I can see
O God
Why ye crete Fate
For the one who is born with a very low estate
Why ye crete de feelings
For it haunts and makes me daunting
and
Why ye crete de sense of loving
Knowing this person I am loosing
I freak and I cry
For the truth I cant deny
Up low I am searching the strength
But the road is still far and length
How I wish to close my eyes
and to heart I tell, its all lies
But my dream says its all true
For the one I love is only you
Shame on you dear heart
For making us both fall apart
For every nite I refuse to dream
Fearing my hope will melt like a cream
I wish to quit life
To heaven I shall drive
But its not that I cant leave
Loosing you as a perfect gift
Why I am into you?
Whilst wondering whether you love me too
Bewitched - You the only one
For the rest of my life, my heart will hunt
As my life is like a dice
but never turn out nice
all in all
I just want you to know
My love to you will always grow
For everything I do
I wish could paint the real you
For seeing your smile
I would run a thousand mile
Take care my love
As I'll be flying with the dove
Bringing our hope and dream together
Never fade dilute for ever
xxx
After a hard consideration between Michael Bolton and Kenny Rogers, I came to a verdict dat da song of 'Have I Told You lately That I Love You' sang by Rod Stewart wud be best to listen whilst reading dis poem.
To listen, please click http://youtube.com/watch?v=0UkIM1WqCi0
And tell me wat u think
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You're not alone
Together we stand
I'll be by your side, you know I'll take your hand
When it gets cold
And it feels like the end
There's no place to go
You know I won't give in
No I won't give in
Keep holding on
'Cause you know we'll make it through, we'll make it through
Just stay strong
'Cause you know I'm here for you, I'm here for you
There's nothing you could say
Nothing you could do
There's no other way when it comes to the truth
So keep holding on
'Cause you know we'll make it through, we'll make it through
i guess u r the first to read my words.
thanks so much.
yeah,let us face this together
love,
me
For a first-timer, Zack Idris, I think you have pushed the limit. I am a highly-critical person especially when involving poetry but when I read your poem, it succeed in telling readers the meaning of love. You love that person but you don't want to possess the one you love. Your poem breathes sincerity and humility. For a first-timer, it's excellent except for certain spelling errors.
You're on your way to becoming a poet. A good piece of art.
salam abg wan,
reading ur poem makes me ponder about so many things. but simply i can tell u here, i think i know what did u mean in ur poem. and about who. but just ignore it's about what or who. as it goes the same for me, i thank u for this poem coz i really now feel the same like what u do. be strong. i'm always here for u, as u always be there for me.
dear lady ians,
thanks a bunch.
realising an experienced literature stud visiting my blog has given me a sense of incitement n feel much appreciated. i respect all ur comments stated and god knows how flowering my heart is to receive all ur praises. it burns da flame in me to keep on writing and expressing and da spirit will never die i ensure you.
i admit dis is my first try with few mistakes n inconsistencies.but as u mentioned it hits da target and da message is clearly understood, it really give me sumting.
To Lord I thank for His gift bestowed on me
kind regards
sir wann
fear element,
feel decipher not, as thru out da way i'll be giving u da signs in identifying who da person is. bear with me and stick to asignofthecreator, for ye shall find de answer.
i thank you for ur comments
regards
xxx
dear aya,
i never know dis piece of art of mine inspires sum1 who is currently sharing da same thing with me.i hope every single words means a lot to u and gives u sumting to ponder upon.
sumtimes assumptions cant be true =)
love,
xxx
Salam...
It suddenly hit me - that this poem corelates with my feeling towards somebody - and yet I have not the courage to say the TRUTH - shall I just wait for the HORN to BLOW Zu?? hehe...
Salam,
I bet ur situation is EXACTLY da same as mine. n u probably understand wat 'exactly' means to both of us.I dun know Ihab,dats y im lost n blurred.
wat else shall i say?
thanks 4 everything
Salam...
Wahohoo.. Say this:
"Ya ENGLISH is just soooo damn WOW!!"
haha.. Giler la ayat segala macam.. Inferior aku rasa... :P
Keep up with da 'British Accent' as per adored by Mirul hehe...
There might never be a sign
No flashing neon light
Telling you to make your move
Or when the time is right
so why not??
Take a crazy chance
Why not??
love,
me
Salam...
Wahhh... Ni entry utk POETs ke?? haha
hehehe..to Mohammad Ihab Ismail;
that is not a poem, it is actually a song by hillary duff entittled "Why not??".. i kinda remember this song which goes well with what zack is facing here.. so,zack.. why not???.. hehehe =p
love,
me
Dear Ihab,
'Never let da fear keep u out from playing da game'. I must say watever I have and possess, to Him I shall thank to.Its from Him dat I might reach ur mind and connect 2 ur heart - be the voice of ours to the entire world.
Never feel inferior or even compare da 2 of us as u already have sumting dat I dun (and will never have) - a mersmerising voice of urs dat seething da ears!!
is he adoring me? well i guess i must say i adore him for his russian proficency in return. i miss his companionship now.
regards,
xxx
Anonymous,
I never come across da song of Duff's, but upon listening and examining da lyrics, I think 'why not' dares us to take da chance whilst it still last. n perhaps,bearing all da consequences might occur.
its true in certain extent but i submit,it cant be applied to all range of circumstances.and i believe ihab knows why.
lemme raise few considerations for u to address:
1)wat if u know (for sure)u wont be able 2 get sumting but u still wanna try?
2)true. dere is no harm in trying.but not all do understand dis as it is.sum ppl will judge u from da very first step u took and da judgment will lie forever in their perception.
hence, in my opinion, its not as easy as 'why not'. =)
I MIGHT BE WRONG. =)
XXX
Salam Ihab,
Ni bukan entry utk poets jer, its just happen to discuss my poem critically.
feel worry not, as i'm preparing sumting for you and us.sumting memorable I hope.
-grins- =)
have a nice day
xxx
omg korang mengumpat aku ke!?? hahaha...
your BRITISH ACCENT is superb - hehe. At least it's the best that i heard from a malay in the UK. well maybe i havent heard enough, that is.
But I'm certain that your accent is quite good. It really does sounds like the Brits hehe.
I'm in Krakow, Poland right now enjoying the free internet and surfing away here and there, dropping by to give comments.
And I REALLY REALLY miss your company, and YOUR STORIES! Oh man you tell stories like people are actually watching a huge screen of collapsing images from your life. Sigh.
AND YES you should really do that talk show thingy that u told us about it. It'll easily beat all the other crappy malay talk show that has been going on, yours is on a whole different standard! *damn i sound sucking up to yah but i dont really care! u really did tell good stories!*
Other than that, lots of hugs from me over here and I really am looking forward to meet and chat up in the future. May our financial (mine actually! haha) condition and geographical location favour our rendesvous.
I really love your poem. But i'm not going to enjoy it now. Later tonight, with a cup of warm coffee and a comfy ambience. :)
Hye Mirul,
I take dat Krakow isnt as interesting as London which resulting u prefer to hibernate in da room rather than chilling out around.
enough sed bout da accent yeah. Nothing so extraordinary seeing an asian speaking da queen's english.I guess everyone has da style of commands n it depends on u to bring it on. but i'll work hard to improvise it as i aim to be an english native speaker in future.
God's willing, da talk show become a reality one day.n i'll make sure dat mine wud be a distinct uniqueness from da existing ones wif new insights n flavours of ours.We rules =) dun wery dear, just hoping for da best for me, u and da rest.finger crossed =)
about da next reunion in mesia, count me in.i definitely joining n really looking forward to seeing u soon. i wonder wat wud happen to us in few months time untill we further meet.
however, if it doesnt work out (hopefully not n never)always remember i am near to ur heart. hence, whenever my name comes across ur mind,just remember dat i'm thinking about you.
As explained,da poem reflects my heart grievance n despondency over sumting i cudnt possess and worse, impossible 2 express.I hope my words reach ur heart for ye might understand da cry of my soul. nevertheless, take it as a wonderful lullaby im providing u before u go to bed.
Have a safe journey home
xxx
Sighhh sedihnyer reply... a good friend had always told me, LET YOUR CRUSH KNOW about your feelings - as it may be the only chance that you'll ever can express ur feeling! Or maybe perhaps there will never be next time, God forbid.
But of course, do it as wisely as ever. Use signs if you have to, and use your brain on how can you make the biggest impact on that person but will the most little effort. :)
The next reunion (like I told u in my latest comment) is actually some kind of a road trip to Ihab's house. Hehe. I'm not sure about the other trip (trip to Bangkok lah! Trip to Bali lah! plan banyak bagai tapi macam susah nak fulfil jer!) because as you know Ihab is having his practical, and so am I. So IMHO this short road trip will not be so difficult for us to fulfil, Insya-Allah.
But then, are you coming back to Malaysia? Dah bertahun2 merantau ni takkan tak rindu tanah air kot? Cut your hair first dear! Hehe..
... and I forgot to reply you about Krakow ;)
Krakow has the most pub, in one place, in Poland (and I don't know about other place but the stats are quite interesting!) it has 300 pubs in the central square ALONE, thanks to it's impressive population of 100,000 students residing in Krakow area. The Polish government had decided that Krakow will be their center of education thereby relocating all of their main vital universities in Krakow.
So it's NOT true that Krakow is less fun than London! Hehehe.. do you know why I chose not to go out? :P *jeng jeng jeng* because I DONT HAVE GOOD COMPANY like you guys to accompany me ~~ !! Hehe...
Well it's okay - I don't really mind cuddling and snuggling with my cup of coffee while enjoying your poem - I told u I'd do so remember.
And when I thought about you - you're thinking about me? Wahhh!! That's one sweet sentence that I'll keep it as an azimat! hehe... Thanks a LOT! I certainly look UP to you as a source of inspiration - satu2nya kawan baya aku yang dah bekerja di UK ;)
Hey focus on your career and please no extraordinary fun just yet until you had fulfilled your parents ambition about your life...
on ur second entry,
alrite, i back off my statement. Krakow is more happening than london (which i believe still open to debate(s)lol.
assuming u r a nite life bearer, i guess it wud be fun if u cud spend a weekend in manchester and i'll bring u 2 da most prominent club (at least to me) in manchester.ihab n wanzul have been dere s a matter of fact. =)
owh isnt dat sweet 2 hear dat? dat u dun have a fun outgoing company like us dere (doubtful) yah u're rite (in ur wildest dream) lol
anyways, I must thank u for spending sum of ur time 2 read my words.its a great honour,indeed, having a reader who was aiming 2 b an english teacher came and read my poem. Asignofthecreator feels much honoured n appreciated by ur visit
will do. am enjoying every single bits in my life now.n hopefully u'll do da same.
regards
x
Dear Mirul,
i supposed i do believe in dat too.however, things arent just as easy as we thought in mind. shud u unaware of my condition, its different from wat others might think. yeah its kinda like similar in da basic prob - hard 2 confess,but da situation of ours (including ihab if u reckon) doesnt permit so. i bet u know wat im talking.
wat if its not rite from da start? wat if dat kind of feelings shudnt happened in da first place?
or we shudnt b together from da start?
wat about sumting u know u wont get it no matter how hard u try?
my mum used 2 forbid us using 'wat if' in life,for it questions da destiny of God, but sumtimes i cudnt help it. why we r given sumting knowing we are loosing it.and its all best 2 conclude under one theme - da complicated life of mine.
huhu.
but watever it is, i wow not to let myself in misery again.i want 2 b happy n get rid all these melancholic episodes in ma life. Life is KICKING now bebeh!! Hence, live 2 da blast while it lasts !!!
i'll make my adjustments for not missing the trip. i'll promise u.cuz it wud be for ages again 2 meet u and hanging out around with all of da stoddart clans. surely its a chance not 2 be missed.
rindu tu rindu laaa (saje jer tulis nnt org ingat aku lupa asal usul plak) lol. but i guess im coping well.if im going back,its for u and us (da stoddart clans) for my parents usually come around. in other way, if i'm back da burden lies on u how to make da gath marvellous and hillarious. more than wat we had b4. amacam? u dare?
hey, get my hair cut isnt neccessary.i am wat i am. dun tell me u r one like all da pakcik2 n joyah2 kampung who have a bad impresion 2 to long hairers.its discrimination ok.(pemikiran kampung gitew)t'ganu kampung kan? hehehehehehe
but i'll promise 2 dress decent when i go 2 ur place.lol. or present my hair in a better way.lol
love,
x
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